Comments on: A November Moment

By: Dave

Dave — Mon, 07 Dec 2009 08:02:28 +0000

Yeah, I thought you were trying to rhyme on purpose. Ya know, since poetry is supposed to rhyme.

By: Alison

Alison — Sun, 06 Dec 2009 13:58:29 +0000

I agree.

And what’s kind of funny is that I wrote this quickly and didn’t look back…now I realize that it seems like I tried to rhyme the first two lines.

By: Dave

Dave — Sat, 05 Dec 2009 20:30:26 +0000

This fall, the words “nature’s confetti dancing on the breeze” meant a lot to me. You know how much I love fall, and on those few days that it seemed like it was raining leaves, I kept thinking about these words. And falling leaves sure seem like a God-style party to me.

By: Mother Dear

Mother Dear — Tue, 24 Nov 2009 13:42:06 +0000

You do have a gift for word pictures.